Thursday, September 13, 2007

Layout almost there.


Hi guys. Here is the layout for my shortfilm. It took long trip actually. Many shots were cut, many ideas changed :). Anyway, here are the things I am going to implement tomorrow:
shot15 - in this shot dad will show the baby how to chew (right now there is just one crappy pose...)
shot 16 - in this shot baby will have different performance, will be more cute and will really try to eat the food, but because it is so ugly baby will spit it out, not intentionally like it is right now.

Any feedback always super welcome!

posted by Maciek Gliwa at 11:44 AM

6 Comments:

  • Oh yeaahhh the end is much much better i love it !!!!!!!!!!
    some action are a little bit cliché example when he makes the plane but.........i love the end LOL!
    nice work

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 4:12 PM  

  • Hey Mahamadou!
    How's going buddy. It's been a long time. Thanks for the feedback. I agree that airplane is a little bit cliche, but at the same time I think that sometimes cliche is good, because audience know that action and can relate. I think this is such situation. And I am really glad that you like the ending. Frankly it makes me laugh everytime I watch it too :)). The spitting was my mentor's idea and I think it work really well :).

    Cheers,

    Maciek

    By Blogger Maciek Gliwa, at 12:46 AM  

  • ahaha is the first time i see it! funny idea, can't wait !
    Hey sometimes connect to msn! ;) i miss chat with you!

    all the bests

    By Blogger Montecristo, at 11:17 AM  

  • Hey Carmelo,
    what's up bro? How's things in Ambient? Have you got production crunchtime already? I bet you do. Yeah, I guess I should use MSN more often but I just prefer skype so much more. But yeah, I will have to install it on my macbook.
    Also thanks for the feedback. So far the story get really nice response and that makes me really happy, because the story works. If it wouldn't , I guess there would be no point to spend all those months to animate it.

    Cheers,

    Maciek

    By Blogger Maciek Gliwa, at 2:11 AM  

  • Always not post your work from Class3 and Class4.......?!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 3:25 AM  

  • I think there is my old lady shot in the archive. I didn't finish my two character dialog yet, I just stuck with it at some point and wasn't really happy with it. I don't like to post the work that I personally think sucks you know ;). But if I find the time to polish it I will definitelly post it. But right now I am really into my shortfilm and that's what I want to be focused on. I will try to post my work on a daily basis, shot by shot. I have really great expectations, I think this shortfilm has a chance to be really good and I want to put my heart and time into it.

    By Blogger Maciek Gliwa, at 3:31 AM  

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